Story Feedback

Is your story captivating enough to hold the attention of your reader? Does your plot fit together without any gaps or holes? Are your characters well developed and believable?

 

With Story Feedback, you’ll gain insights into what’s working in your manuscript and where it can strengthen. The feedback will encompass everything from the structure and plot to character development to the nuances of your writing style, ensuring your story meets and exceeds reader expectations.

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What I’ll review

• Story Structure: Does your narrative flow from beginning to end?

• Plot Development: Are your plot points believable without gaps or implausibilites, and do they drive the story forward?

• Characterisation: Are your characters compelling, with clear motivations and actions that are believable?

• Pacing: Does your story maintain the pacing balance?

• Scene Construction: Are your scenes purposeful and effective in building the story?

• World Building: Is your fictional world immersive and convincing?

• Reader Engagement: Does your writing resonate with your target audience?

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What You’ll Receive​

 

Comprehensive Editorial Letter
You’ll receive a detailed editorial letter (these are generally a minimum of 10 pages long) that outlines what’s working well and what areas could be refined. This letter will provide actionable suggestions tailored to your story’s genre and goals, setting you up for a successful revision process. It will also cover what works well in the story, as it’s important to focus on positives too!

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Follow Up Consultation
Once you have read through the feedback, we can schedule a call to discuss your thoughts and any questions that you may have. We’ll work together to refine your manuscript, ensuring that you feel confident about the steps you need to take moving forward.